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Right after the boy got out of bed he ran out of his room, jumped down the stairs, and then the boy
was eating breakfast.
There seems to be faulty parallelism in the last thing the boy does...
Right after the boy got out of bed he ran out of his room, jumped down the stairs, and then the boy
was eating breakfast.
Eating is a gerund which doesn't match the form that was used for the 2 other activites the boy did
after getting out of bed. To correct the sentence you must make the last part of the sentence parallel.
Right after the boy got out of bed he ran out of his room, jumped down the stairs, and then
ate breakfast.
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